I am not leaving the server but it has been a fun experience administrating the server. It's been fun and sometimes stressful but I'm sure many people can work up to doing a better job than myself. Thank you for your time and for accepting me into the community. I will still be on but I wish to...

Not sure what people expect in the application but I assume it should be treated as if you are applying for a job in real life. So I suggest as a friend and Administrator to edit it and/or look it over. Small things like not upper casing some letters such as the start of your sentences, could be...