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Caelea Olyminaius Character Application

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Proto

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Steam Name/Steam ID : Proto / STEAM_0:1:1101968

How long have you played on the server?: Many months.

Characters name/nicknames: Caelea Olymnianus

Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)) : Turian.

Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/ranks-aboard-the-ship.1723/)) : Security

Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) :

Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral:

  • 90% Paragon
  • 10% Renegade

Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)) :

Caelea was born 10 years after the birth of Taia Olyminaius. She grew up around loving parents who had already lost one daughter to the hierarchy. While Taia remained mostly in contact with her sister, it was to her parents dismay that she also possessed biotic abilities. This unfortunately meant she also would be taken by the hierarchy and trained to the best of their degree. She went through the training with relative ease, given advice from her sister Taia as well as training directly from her. Caelea always had a strong sense of morality and managed to maintain a good moral compass when it came to making decisions. This also resulted in her being a little head strong and emotional in decision making though as a Cabal this was culled a bit, though is still evident especially when a "nerve" was hit, so to speak. She made it through Cabal training quite decently, specializing in biotic defense, like her sister. She was excellent at picking apart arguments and preventing brawls from going forward. Caelea is also capable of defending against hostile fire.


What is your characters goal aboard the ship? Why were they hired by New Eden? :
She's here to fill the boots of someone long gone from the ship. Her own sister Taia. Her goals are to determine how Taia even died and to make sure she carries on her legacy. She was hired by New Eden as a contractor put out by the Hierarchy. As an active Cabal troop, she continues to serve the hierarchy but possesses some freedom to assist the Reaper threat in any way she pleases.
 

Dayzcool

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I think you need to revise it personally. Cabals and just turians in general are one of the hardest races to rp. Plus your backstory is very vague. So until you make longer and more effort put into it I would have to -1.
 

HexyFlexyMonGon

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It was pre-authed, so I guess I'm going to be lenient about my supporting.

Add to the backstory - At least a few Paragraphs. Also, if you're going off Cabal Vanguard, I suggest you add some powers/gear specified to them.
 

[OMFL] Z

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Strenuous Approval. While pre- Approved, there will be a lot of eyes on this character.
 
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