Phoenix185
Hollowed
Steam Name/Steam ID : STEAM_0:0:163315968
How long have you played on the server?: 2 months
Characters name/nicknames: Max Grayson
Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)) :
Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/available-positions-aboard-the-ship.2905/)) : Research and Develoment (RND)
Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) :
Cloak CQC 2 Tech 2 M-92 Mantis
Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral: Neutral
Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)) : Max was born in 2154 on a Alliance Vessel when he was older his parents decided to train him to be a soldier due to his family being a Military one as he grew up he grew skilled in combat and weaponry by the age 14 the he was allowed to apply for the Alliance at the age 17 and he was put into the First contact war as well he was great on the field taking orders well also killing hostiles quickly and easily at the age 20 he was already a well trained soldier leading a small team after 5 years him and his team was assigned to a mission on Shanxi again while they were setting up a camp then injured Alliance soldiers came up with a small heavily damaged Storage carrier as Max's team was going to repair as well as him he saw a charge set on one of the colonists then before he could say anything the explosion happened as well Turians attacked them Max's team suffered heavy casualties as well him losing his left arm from the explosion luckily one of Max's men called in reinforcements the Turians soon were killed and Max was taken to one of the alliance ships to the area to help with his arm situation he soon got a bionic arm to help him continue his work as an alliance soldier but just a year later one of the crew members on the ship went crazy trying to the ship Max was on he quickly tried stopping them failing as the crazy crew member destroyed the engine and the core Everyone quickly evacuated the ship but ship rubble landed on Max's right making him to cut off his right arm as they evacuated to the other Alliance ship near by where Max got another Bionic arm after 3 years Max was again put back on Shanxi clearing the Turians situation as they were trying to find the Turian Base then one of the scouts found it Max grabbed his mantis and quickly killed the two guards up front the alliance soldiers soon did a frontal attack and Max's soon rushed in inside his orders was to kill all the Turians inside the base as they went deeper into the base Max quickly lost his men easily until it was only him he quickly armed explosives inside the base's generator as he did a Turian put a gun on his head Max soon grabbed the turian and broke his arm he quickly put a gun in his head Max soon ran outside the base by himself blowing it up as they won the remaining alliance soldiers quickly returned back to the ship after 9 years of being in the alliance and becoming a Veteran Alliance Soldier Max soon retired and joined a mercenary group where he was quickly assign to get a payment from someone as he got to the contact's apartment as he knocked on the door he heard a window break as he broke in the apartment home he saw someone climbing up the building Max soon chased rooftop to rooftop until the contact was stuck at a end of anymore apartments the contact soon attacked Max with a knife as he tried shooting him the contact threw his gun over the edge and Max's eye was soon cut out by him as Max grabbed his hand and stole his knife and killed the contact by sticking the knife to his head and when he got back to the mercenary base he was soon given a bionic eye due to his eye being cut out as he did he stayed in the mercenary for 2 more years until one of his friends he met told Him about New Eden so he decided to Join.
What is your characters goal aboard the ship? Just to be an asset instead of a waste of medical supplies
Why were they hired by New Eden? : Max was hired due to his amazing combat and weaponary skills and his leadership skills
How long have you played on the server?: 2 months
Characters name/nicknames: Max Grayson
Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)) :
Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/available-positions-aboard-the-ship.2905/)) : Research and Develoment (RND)
Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) :
Cloak CQC 2 Tech 2 M-92 Mantis
Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral: Neutral
Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)) : Max was born in 2154 on a Alliance Vessel when he was older his parents decided to train him to be a soldier due to his family being a Military one as he grew up he grew skilled in combat and weaponry by the age 14 the he was allowed to apply for the Alliance at the age 17 and he was put into the First contact war as well he was great on the field taking orders well also killing hostiles quickly and easily at the age 20 he was already a well trained soldier leading a small team after 5 years him and his team was assigned to a mission on Shanxi again while they were setting up a camp then injured Alliance soldiers came up with a small heavily damaged Storage carrier as Max's team was going to repair as well as him he saw a charge set on one of the colonists then before he could say anything the explosion happened as well Turians attacked them Max's team suffered heavy casualties as well him losing his left arm from the explosion luckily one of Max's men called in reinforcements the Turians soon were killed and Max was taken to one of the alliance ships to the area to help with his arm situation he soon got a bionic arm to help him continue his work as an alliance soldier but just a year later one of the crew members on the ship went crazy trying to the ship Max was on he quickly tried stopping them failing as the crazy crew member destroyed the engine and the core Everyone quickly evacuated the ship but ship rubble landed on Max's right making him to cut off his right arm as they evacuated to the other Alliance ship near by where Max got another Bionic arm after 3 years Max was again put back on Shanxi clearing the Turians situation as they were trying to find the Turian Base then one of the scouts found it Max grabbed his mantis and quickly killed the two guards up front the alliance soldiers soon did a frontal attack and Max's soon rushed in inside his orders was to kill all the Turians inside the base as they went deeper into the base Max quickly lost his men easily until it was only him he quickly armed explosives inside the base's generator as he did a Turian put a gun on his head Max soon grabbed the turian and broke his arm he quickly put a gun in his head Max soon ran outside the base by himself blowing it up as they won the remaining alliance soldiers quickly returned back to the ship after 9 years of being in the alliance and becoming a Veteran Alliance Soldier Max soon retired and joined a mercenary group where he was quickly assign to get a payment from someone as he got to the contact's apartment as he knocked on the door he heard a window break as he broke in the apartment home he saw someone climbing up the building Max soon chased rooftop to rooftop until the contact was stuck at a end of anymore apartments the contact soon attacked Max with a knife as he tried shooting him the contact threw his gun over the edge and Max's eye was soon cut out by him as Max grabbed his hand and stole his knife and killed the contact by sticking the knife to his head and when he got back to the mercenary base he was soon given a bionic eye due to his eye being cut out as he did he stayed in the mercenary for 2 more years until one of his friends he met told Him about New Eden so he decided to Join.
What is your characters goal aboard the ship? Just to be an asset instead of a waste of medical supplies
Why were they hired by New Eden? : Max was hired due to his amazing combat and weaponary skills and his leadership skills
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