Phoenix185
Hollowed
Steam Name/Steam ID : STEAM_0:0:163315968
How long have you played on the server?: For a while considering I just hit 1669 hours on gmod
Characters name/nicknames: Rafael Salvador/ 'Criatura'
Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)) : Human
Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/available-positions-aboard-the-ship.2905/)) : Infantry
Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) :
M-37 Falcon, M-76 Revenant, Frag grenades
Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral: Neutral
Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)) : Rafael Salvador or how he's mostly known by Criatura is a "Business" mercenary who's hired with other people to take people down he was born on the year 2156 it is unknown which day or month he was actually born but his estimated age is 31.
His parents Ramon and Sabrina Salvador were a Anti-Alien family his Older brother Carmelo always followed the ways of their parents and other people who were Anti-Alien but Rafael didn't care if other races were on the planet or if they were studying them he just wanted to explore and steal he was a huge trouble maker usually busting up people's houses or beating up other children who messed with him his parents usually made him stay inside due to always causing trouble and still not following what his parents did, they never allowed him to leave and explore unless he did what his family was doing of course being anti-Alien causing riots and all that he declined and continued to stay in his home. One day he had enough being forced to do stuff when he had no reason to do so when he was finally 18 he stole credits from his parents and supplies from his parents and snuck out of his home 30 minutes.
A few hours later he heard some one call him it was his brother Carmelo, Rafael soon ran for it trying to find a shuttle to steal his brother continued to chase him Rafael soon thought fast and threw a garbage bin on the side of the road he was running on it his Carmelo and he fell head first making his face skid across the ground making it absolutely bloody and Rafael saw Carmelo and ran back to him checking if he was okay his shoes got covered in some of his blood and just a few minutes later a police vehicle came around to see what happened and it seemed like Rafael attacked him the cops pulled out their weapons pointing it at Rafael, in such a short time to react Rafael ran again attempting to escape again just not from his brother this time.
He climbed the rooftops still continuing to try and escape the cops until reinforcements came and they all opened fire on him one of the cops hit Rafael in the leg making him limping away on the rooftops and harder to jump from building to building and it was he wasn't able to make one jump and smashed through a window one of the cops went inside the building and looked for Rafael he looked on the first floor and found nothing the cop soon went upstairs and continued to search the building until Rafael ambushed the cop, back outside the building several shots went out from inside the a group of officers went inside investigating what happened they went upstairs and found the cop holding a pistol looking at Rafael with bullet holes all over his face as the put the body into a body bag the cop who shot the person disappeared but the cop who supposedly killed Rafael was him He killed the cop and took his clothes making it look like he himself was dead as well all the equipment Rafael had was gone.
He managed to finally find and steal a shuttle and left his home and everyone he knew and of course the first place to start a new life was Omega as he traveled there it started out bad getting mugged, attacked, and beaten up until he found someone that actually helped Rafael which was rare on Omega very rare but he was lucky the person his name was John Morse or how he was mostly known as 'Kevlar' he helped Rafael find his new life Kevlar was a mercenary who was hired to kill someone, destroy something, or just protect them and now he was showing Rafael how to do his work so he gave Rafael heavy armor, a similar mask that Kevlar had, and a Revenant but he first trained him to use it due to the Revenant being very powerful though it took trial and error and nearly killing himself countless times he finally learned how to use it.
They went to do the job apparently it was to kill a big business man named Leo Jones and destroy his building on earth so they traveled there and instead of going in the quiet way Kevlar took out a ML-77 Missile Launcher and blew the gate right open all the guards rushed in and attempted to take both Rafael and Kevlar down. the guards were blown up and were just filled with bullets, as they both moved into the building killing guards and they planted bombs all over the building and continuing to go up the building after repeatedly killing guards and planting bombs they finally got to Leo but he had extra security measures system turrets came out and started shooting at them. Kevlar took a hit to his arm dropping his missile launcher Rafael grabbed him taking him to cover and soon went for the missile launcher while getting shot at and luckily he was able to grab it and shoot it at the turrets destroying them, Rafael dropped the weapon and went for Leo, Rafael grabbed Leo by his tux collar and threw him out the window making Leo falling to his death.
As Rafael looked out the window where he threw out Leo he saw cops swarming the area he went back to Kevlar and helped him up and they now had to do what the did in the beginning shoot people and not die again they shot cops and went down the building over and over again, as they finally got down to the floor and went out the door Rafael saw Leo dead on the ground with some of his body parts just blood mesh but soon after they were getting shot again by more cop reinforcements they both went in cover again, Kevlar was holding his wound as it was bleeding badly but he moved his hand giving Kevlar a Falcon he soon grabbed it exploding the cops covering the exit. He went to go help Kevlar again leaving the building and back into their shuttle Kevlar soon gave Rafael the detonator and as the flew away they both looked out the window Rafael activated the detonator and they both saw the building explode in front of their eyes.
They finally got back to Omega to their safe house Kevlar got medi-gel putting it in his wound luckily the bullet went right through so it was easy to treat and the man who gave them the job they both got the credits and now they continued to do more job people who learned about the attacked now called Rafael 'Criatura' so they both continued to do jobs for years messing with other races destroying their stuff all that. When Rafael was finally 29 Kevlar let Rafael do a job by himself they were assigned to protect a man called David Crello but instead of the both of the Rafael was gonna do it by himself. Rafael went to the location there was no one there not even a vehicle so as he looked around a shot just missed his head. Rafael ran into an alley way he tried finding where he was getting shot all he knew is that the person shooting him was in the dark.Rafael followed where the bullets came from and started shooting and killing them but Rafael was confused what was going on how did other people now where he was.
Rafael ran and shot trying to escape them a rocket went out killing a group of people chasing Rafael, It was Kevlar he covered Rafael as he made his escape as the two fought killing people and blowing stuff up they finally made their mistake at a junkyard Rafael was still confused on how he was figured out then Kevlar pulled out a gun on Rafael taking his weapons and throwing them to the side apparently Kevlar did the job as he set Rafael up but he didn't want them to kill Rafael only himself could due to them working for years now. Rafael soon tackled Kevlar and they both fought as they both tried grabbing weapons but they both failed each time after they threw several punches at each other until Kevlar kicked Rafael off into a pile of junk and soon after the pile was collapsing and they all fell on Rafael, Kevlar soon grabbed his weapons and walked away talking into his Omni-radio and leaving the junk yard.
A few hours later the pile of junk started moving as one of the junk part came off and Rafael gasped for air slowly climbing out of the junk pile he soon went back to the safe house where Kevlar and Rafael used to make plans but no one was there none of there equipment were there just a empty room with a couch. After two years of being assumed dead he decided not to take off his mask that much anymore due to being dead back in his home town and due to being assumed dead to Kevlar.
Rafael was lost he had lost everything again he wanted to do what he did back then but that would risk himself getting caught and killed by Kevlar. As weeks passed by basically being unemployed he went for a walk since Kevlar seemed to disappear from Omega. As he was walking he heard someone talking about a supposedly mercenary group called New Eden and by hearing what they did it seemed much better then joining The Blue suns or The Eclipse so he applied for three reasons to get payed, to blow stuff up, and to hide himself from getting caught by Kevlar.
Why were they hired by New Eden? : Rafael was hired due to his expert demolition skills to arm and disarm explosives in such a short time and Rafael basically had heavy equipment to handle tough jobs
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How long have you played on the server?: For a while considering I just hit 1669 hours on gmod
Characters name/nicknames: Rafael Salvador/ 'Criatura'
Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)) : Human
Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/available-positions-aboard-the-ship.2905/)) : Infantry
Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) :
M-37 Falcon, M-76 Revenant, Frag grenades
Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral: Neutral
Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)) : Rafael Salvador or how he's mostly known by Criatura is a "Business" mercenary who's hired with other people to take people down he was born on the year 2156 it is unknown which day or month he was actually born but his estimated age is 31.
His parents Ramon and Sabrina Salvador were a Anti-Alien family his Older brother Carmelo always followed the ways of their parents and other people who were Anti-Alien but Rafael didn't care if other races were on the planet or if they were studying them he just wanted to explore and steal he was a huge trouble maker usually busting up people's houses or beating up other children who messed with him his parents usually made him stay inside due to always causing trouble and still not following what his parents did, they never allowed him to leave and explore unless he did what his family was doing of course being anti-Alien causing riots and all that he declined and continued to stay in his home. One day he had enough being forced to do stuff when he had no reason to do so when he was finally 18 he stole credits from his parents and supplies from his parents and snuck out of his home 30 minutes.
A few hours later he heard some one call him it was his brother Carmelo, Rafael soon ran for it trying to find a shuttle to steal his brother continued to chase him Rafael soon thought fast and threw a garbage bin on the side of the road he was running on it his Carmelo and he fell head first making his face skid across the ground making it absolutely bloody and Rafael saw Carmelo and ran back to him checking if he was okay his shoes got covered in some of his blood and just a few minutes later a police vehicle came around to see what happened and it seemed like Rafael attacked him the cops pulled out their weapons pointing it at Rafael, in such a short time to react Rafael ran again attempting to escape again just not from his brother this time.
He climbed the rooftops still continuing to try and escape the cops until reinforcements came and they all opened fire on him one of the cops hit Rafael in the leg making him limping away on the rooftops and harder to jump from building to building and it was he wasn't able to make one jump and smashed through a window one of the cops went inside the building and looked for Rafael he looked on the first floor and found nothing the cop soon went upstairs and continued to search the building until Rafael ambushed the cop, back outside the building several shots went out from inside the a group of officers went inside investigating what happened they went upstairs and found the cop holding a pistol looking at Rafael with bullet holes all over his face as the put the body into a body bag the cop who shot the person disappeared but the cop who supposedly killed Rafael was him He killed the cop and took his clothes making it look like he himself was dead as well all the equipment Rafael had was gone.
He managed to finally find and steal a shuttle and left his home and everyone he knew and of course the first place to start a new life was Omega as he traveled there it started out bad getting mugged, attacked, and beaten up until he found someone that actually helped Rafael which was rare on Omega very rare but he was lucky the person his name was John Morse or how he was mostly known as 'Kevlar' he helped Rafael find his new life Kevlar was a mercenary who was hired to kill someone, destroy something, or just protect them and now he was showing Rafael how to do his work so he gave Rafael heavy armor, a similar mask that Kevlar had, and a Revenant but he first trained him to use it due to the Revenant being very powerful though it took trial and error and nearly killing himself countless times he finally learned how to use it.
They went to do the job apparently it was to kill a big business man named Leo Jones and destroy his building on earth so they traveled there and instead of going in the quiet way Kevlar took out a ML-77 Missile Launcher and blew the gate right open all the guards rushed in and attempted to take both Rafael and Kevlar down. the guards were blown up and were just filled with bullets, as they both moved into the building killing guards and they planted bombs all over the building and continuing to go up the building after repeatedly killing guards and planting bombs they finally got to Leo but he had extra security measures system turrets came out and started shooting at them. Kevlar took a hit to his arm dropping his missile launcher Rafael grabbed him taking him to cover and soon went for the missile launcher while getting shot at and luckily he was able to grab it and shoot it at the turrets destroying them, Rafael dropped the weapon and went for Leo, Rafael grabbed Leo by his tux collar and threw him out the window making Leo falling to his death.
As Rafael looked out the window where he threw out Leo he saw cops swarming the area he went back to Kevlar and helped him up and they now had to do what the did in the beginning shoot people and not die again they shot cops and went down the building over and over again, as they finally got down to the floor and went out the door Rafael saw Leo dead on the ground with some of his body parts just blood mesh but soon after they were getting shot again by more cop reinforcements they both went in cover again, Kevlar was holding his wound as it was bleeding badly but he moved his hand giving Kevlar a Falcon he soon grabbed it exploding the cops covering the exit. He went to go help Kevlar again leaving the building and back into their shuttle Kevlar soon gave Rafael the detonator and as the flew away they both looked out the window Rafael activated the detonator and they both saw the building explode in front of their eyes.
They finally got back to Omega to their safe house Kevlar got medi-gel putting it in his wound luckily the bullet went right through so it was easy to treat and the man who gave them the job they both got the credits and now they continued to do more job people who learned about the attacked now called Rafael 'Criatura' so they both continued to do jobs for years messing with other races destroying their stuff all that. When Rafael was finally 29 Kevlar let Rafael do a job by himself they were assigned to protect a man called David Crello but instead of the both of the Rafael was gonna do it by himself. Rafael went to the location there was no one there not even a vehicle so as he looked around a shot just missed his head. Rafael ran into an alley way he tried finding where he was getting shot all he knew is that the person shooting him was in the dark.Rafael followed where the bullets came from and started shooting and killing them but Rafael was confused what was going on how did other people now where he was.
Rafael ran and shot trying to escape them a rocket went out killing a group of people chasing Rafael, It was Kevlar he covered Rafael as he made his escape as the two fought killing people and blowing stuff up they finally made their mistake at a junkyard Rafael was still confused on how he was figured out then Kevlar pulled out a gun on Rafael taking his weapons and throwing them to the side apparently Kevlar did the job as he set Rafael up but he didn't want them to kill Rafael only himself could due to them working for years now. Rafael soon tackled Kevlar and they both fought as they both tried grabbing weapons but they both failed each time after they threw several punches at each other until Kevlar kicked Rafael off into a pile of junk and soon after the pile was collapsing and they all fell on Rafael, Kevlar soon grabbed his weapons and walked away talking into his Omni-radio and leaving the junk yard.
A few hours later the pile of junk started moving as one of the junk part came off and Rafael gasped for air slowly climbing out of the junk pile he soon went back to the safe house where Kevlar and Rafael used to make plans but no one was there none of there equipment were there just a empty room with a couch. After two years of being assumed dead he decided not to take off his mask that much anymore due to being dead back in his home town and due to being assumed dead to Kevlar.
Rafael was lost he had lost everything again he wanted to do what he did back then but that would risk himself getting caught and killed by Kevlar. As weeks passed by basically being unemployed he went for a walk since Kevlar seemed to disappear from Omega. As he was walking he heard someone talking about a supposedly mercenary group called New Eden and by hearing what they did it seemed much better then joining The Blue suns or The Eclipse so he applied for three reasons to get payed, to blow stuff up, and to hide himself from getting caught by Kevlar.
Why were they hired by New Eden? : Rafael was hired due to his expert demolition skills to arm and disarm explosives in such a short time and Rafael basically had heavy equipment to handle tough jobs
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