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Phoenix185

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Steam Name/Steam ID : STEAM_0:0:163315968

How long have you played on the server?: A while now


Characters name/nicknames: Galter Caedus

Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)) : Turian

Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/available-positions-aboard-the-ship.2905/)) : Medical

Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) : Skilled in Close quarter combat, Skilled in medical treatment and such,Equipment are AT-12 Raider, M-6 Carnifrex

Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral: Neutral

Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)) : Galter was born on the planet Altakiril near the captial Estivus Erax on the year 1257 His mother Pedra Caedus was a loving mother while His Father Argrius Caedus was strict when Galter was five his father already made him do many physical activities in the harsh cold weather His father always wanted to have him work at his fullest and work strong and hard Galter's mother Pedra always cared for Galter after he did the training with his father, When Galter was thirteen a his father showed him how to use a gun and it was the first normal father and son time Galter had ever revived until storm struck and destroyed thousands of homes and killed many lives including Galter's mother, What happened is that Argrius went to help the neigbors as Galter went to go find his mother but Galter's child hood home collapsed around his mother making her get stuck as Galter attempted to save her but failed the building crushed her as his father Argrius came back from helping the neighbors and succeding and heard what Galter failed at doing he was full of rage all of Galter's training and it still wasn't enough, Argrius now forced Galter to going at his full potential even if he was too tired to run he would force him to do it once when Galter didn't do a single word his father told him to he slashed him with a knife to his right eye leaving a scar and his right eye blinded, After months and months of training Galter's father finally gave him a break Galter studied on medication and rescuing due to him losing his mother and many of his friends he studied it so at least one day if it happened again he could save some lives instead of losing more,when it was Galter's fifteenth birthday he started boot camp as he started it was the same thing his father forced him to do everyday So the training was normal for him he was the highest and best trained turian in boot camp after a year he was in the turian military serving as a medical trooper due to his medical skills he learned when he was younger when he was seventeen he went into the worse battle in his life he had to help many injured turians on the field he was able to save most of them but not all the FOB he was in was taking heavy artillery fire from Turian rebels who disagreed againts the Hierarchy but even so Galter continued to save as much lives he could so they could get back to battle soon after a few months they won againts the Rebels the remaining rebels either were killed or escaped the Hierarchy's wrath after that Galter was assigned to diffrent locations through his years in the military then when he was finally twenty nine news came in that his home planet where he was born was wiped out from the reapers Galter was devastated all of his friends were gone but his father was alive which one of the things he was glad for but only a few months when he visited his father in his new home on the Citadel the apartment door was open when Galter went inside he saw there was a box on Argrius table as he opened it he soon found out his father was part of the Turian rebels back when he was in the fight but he found out even more he was in it for such a long time much before Galter was bron and before he met Pedra he was apart of it and soon he found out his father Argrius joined someone else due to the turian rebels failing but before he could get a name of who he was working with his father saw Galter looking through his stuff he soon quickly shot at him Galter Hid behind the couch and take cover Galter struggled to attack back due to Argrius being his only family member left a cruel and dangerous man but he was all he had left Galter soon had an Idea Shooting at the window jumping through it grabbing a ledge and climbing down but Argrius continued to fire at him Galter just managed to dodge the bullets except one making him fall to the ground though he was just a few inches away from the ground as Galter fell he soon got up holding his shoulder and ran he soon got back to his fellow soldiers and told them what happened Galter got quick medical treatment and him and his brother in arms went back to his father's apartment but saw everything was gone Argrius had made his escape as Galter and the rest of the other turian soldiers investigated the area Galter soon found a data pad saying that Argrius said himself that he made the right choice joining this the new unknown army it showed no name on who was commanding the new army nor the name of it but Galter knew the Hierarchy wouldn't care what galter's father did but put Galter as a high suspect even though he was fully innocent though Galter continued to stay in the Military though he wasn't trusted and he was espacially hated by his General when he found out The assigned Galter with other soldiers to investigate a crashed turian ship though they didn't trust him as everyone else as everyone loaded into the shuttle people shoved Galter around though he just ignored it focusing on the mission once they got to the planet where the crashed Turian ship was the pilot opened the shuttle door but as everyone unloaded from the shuttle one of the soldiers got his head blown off by a sniper shot as soon as they died everyone else used the rocks in that location as cover the shuttle flew up trying to escape to get backup but as soon as it was off the ground several rockets hit the shuttle making it blow up the debris that was from the shuttle hit and killed two of Galter's fellow teammates soon after several shot came from all around them they hardly had any cover making everyone except Galter get killed Galter had a few wounds but still kept fighting as he did he was able to kill the sniper after that all the shooting stopped Galter began holding his wound observing what was going on soon after he felt a thud hid the back of his head knocking him straight out 20 hours later he woke up in a cell though it wasn't anthing that belonged to the Turian Hierarchy Galter couldn't think due to having a severe headache days passed as Galter was still where ever he was until alarms went off and the cell doors opened he peaked outside seeing dead guards and dying turians he grabed one of the dead turian's guns fighting his way out he killed and injured many of the guards and quckly escaped in one of their shuttles Galter got to the citadel going to get medical help for his wounds which he did after that he stayed in the citadel for and he soon heard about a PMC group called New Eden and had trouble with a turian army that was owned by an anti-Alien Turian called Orbis And decided to join so he could at least find about hints where his father was and help people along the way for his mother and for himself.

What is your characters goal aboard the ship? Galter's goal is to basically kill his father due to betraying the Turian Hierarchy and helping people along the way to prove his innocence

Why were they hired by New Eden? : For his medical skills due to there being very few medics on the ship
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Dayzcool

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Server hasn't been up for more then 6 months kiddo
 

HexyFlexyMonGon

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This application is far too short. For someone that points out subpar Quarian and Turian applications, you sure don't know when you've made one yourself.

-Support.
 

Kai

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+Support

Considerably
long enough compared to other Turian apps.
A good RPer on other chars
I see barely any false-lore stuff on this app
I trust this user enough to not do stupid changable lore shit with it.
 
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