Simplyderpys Character app

[simplyderp]

Steam Name/Steam ID : Simplyderpy123

How long have you played on the server?: around a hour.

Characters name/nicknames: Sky Ficara

Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)) : Turian.

Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/available-positions-aboard-the-ship.2905/)) : Pilot

Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) : Standar gear.

Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral: Neutral.

Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)) : Sky Ficara born on the Turian home world, He had a simple up bringing, Parents working as engineers for the army, as his parents taught him to be a engineer the military took great interest in him at a young age, soon enough after abit of training even his piloting skills were amazing. From 9-14 he was trained by his father so he could excel in the army and get a higher rank. As his father constantly told sky how great the honer is to be so high ranked, Sky became disinterested and looked for jobs he saw as more important such as piloting or engineering. When he was 15 he had standard training for a year and he also had extra courses so he could become a pilot. When he was 18 he joined on a mission to deploy the genophage to sterilize the krogan to stop there crusade for honer and power. After a couple years of military service he finnaly got excepted as a pilot and flew multiple missions into hot zones. He was known to get out of dangerous situations with only a couple scratches. After a year or so he applied to become a pilot of a bigger ship called the Icarus....

What is your characters goal aboard the ship? Why were they hired by New Eden? :My goal is to find a new reason to strive to get stronger mentally and physically, I was hired for my marksmanship and Engineering skills.

 

[Coffee_Cup_Carl]

Needs a long back story. Like a REALLY long back story.

 

[simplyderp]

Needs a long back story. Like a REALLY long back story.

I edited it hope you like

 

[Coffee_Cup_Carl]

I mean like paragraphs long, a short story almost, I know it kinda sucks to do, but it really adds a lot of depth to it. You might want to look up Turian lore, as the story seems to have a hard time sticking to the bounds of such a race.

http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Turian

Here is the wiki on it.

Boot camp begins on the 15th birthday. Soldiers receive a year of training before being assigned to a field unit; officers train for even longer. Most serve until the age of 30, at which they become part of the Reserves. Even if they suffer injuries preventing front-line service, most do support work behind the lines.

That right there shows what a turian childhood may be like.

 

[Cross]

You can also check other turian apps to help yourself in making your char app

 

[simplyderp]

I mean like paragraphs long, a short story almost, I know it kinda sucks to do, but it really adds a lot of depth to it. You might want to look up Turian lore, as the story seems to have a hard time sticking to the bounds of such a race.

http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Turian

Here is the wiki on it.

Boot camp begins on the 15th birthday. Soldiers receive a year of training before being assigned to a field unit; officers train for even longer. Most serve until the age of 30, at which they become part of the Reserves. Even if they suffer injuries preventing front-line service, most do support work behind the lines.

That right there shows what a turian childhood may be like.

Edited again

 

[Vanity]

Denied- Denied due to the fact that the application is not very well made, due to you not knowing much of Turians and due to Turians being a very serious race, learn the lore and consider reapplying