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Songwriting and Me

Kai

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I made this thread due to a deep amount of stress I have gained these last few weeks, the only way I ever dealt with stress was by singing a song in my head or writing one.

I'm not a good songwriter but no matter what after writing one I'm happy again and I barely use that word ever... "happy". I'm looking to change myself and leave people who thought I shouldn't have been me.
I'd like to read one of your songs I doubt that you'll even do it but at least now you know that I can't let go and the problems be so cold, this is the only I can be bold.
This is meant to be a serious post no time for jokes or calling me "edgy" because now, I'm done being called names.

I wrote this song in honor of my friend who passed away if you were there from the last community. To this day I miss him, and I won't stop missing him. Unlike most people in this community for example @Jonathan Wilson , @Colt Miller , @Palehorse6 , @Sevan, @KingHarsh he was a bloody true friend, no offense just honesty. This song is called Heartsore Forgiving Love.




The day you were gone there was a rout.


Wanted to think you’ll be out and about.


But all I think is how you brought me to a drought.


Thought I was right but clearly it was the wrong route.


What could've I had changed


A butterfly and it's effect, effect on everyone.


The help it does to engage.


You had cried for help, cried for anyone.


Only just to be paged.


And now that you're gone, my emotions they are none.


All I do now, is cry me a mage.


To revive you and your pain after the long run.


I know when the world seems so cruel.


Your heart will make you seem like a fool.


But I promise you a pool.


A pool of heartsore forgiving love.


I'm going to be a sign just like a dove.


You won't have to go back to that lonely cove.


Because it's what you need, heartsore forgiving love.


You might just catch a cold.


But it will teach you to be bold.


And you'll see how the story unfolds.


Only life tells me, that it's too late to save you.


It's hard to think that we just had no clue.


That maybe someday, you would cut your own life so short.


A mighty terrible event that comes out of the blue.


We could've put the pieces of you back together with glue.


But life for you was just a mission you had to abort.


And yeah.


All I do now, is cry me a mage.


To revive you and heal your pain.


I know when the thoughts seems to dual.


Your brain will make you seem like a tool.


But I promise you a pool.


A pool of heartsore forgiving love.


I've known that pain burning like an open stove.


I've walked that same mile before feels like a rove.


Because it's what you need, heartsore forgiving love.


Oh but you might feel sold.


Just wait until you are told.


And you'll see how the story unfolds.


If only had I loved you more.


You'd still be right here.


If only I hadn't been so selfish.


You’d find the one to hear.


If I could go back.


And change something.


Just find something.


Do something for you.


Be something to you.


If I even had the chance to say goodbye.


If I had known it be your last day on Earth.


I’d hold your hand, with a smile.


I'd be there to the last ray of sunlight.


All I do now, is cry me a mage.


To revive you and heal your pain.


I know when the world seems so cruel.


Your heart will make you seem like a fool.


I know when the thoughts seems to dual.


Your brain will make you seem like a tool.


I'd promise you a pool.


A pool of heartsore forgiving love.


I'm going to be a sign just like a dove.


You won't have to go back to that lonely cove.


I've known that pain burning like an open stove.


I've walked that same mile before feels like a rove.


(Ooo).


Because it's what you need, heartsore forgiving love.


You might just catch a cold.


But it will teach you to be bold.


Oh but you might feel sold.


Just wait until you are told.


And you'll see how the story truly unfolds.


But now I know, it’s too late for any of that now that you’re gone.


Forever in a better place with the heartsore forgiving love withdrawn.


Thank you I know it's bad but it still makes me happy, that I could still feel connected somewhat to my issues.
 
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Kai

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Feel free to leave your input...or a song, peace..
 

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Gumpy you have Australian songs xd
 

Kai

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This song I wrote in the 7th grade back when I use to live in Cork for about 2 years, this is Say Your Grace.



It seems hopeless, I'd know.


But in the beginning,


We were both hanging by a thread


Your voice hurts, it's piercing.


It's enough to make me think


That I could maybe just trim your wings


Fall with me and just


Die with me


Forever we flee from those


Piercing voices, and that thinning thread


You would've known, how much I loved you.


If I hadn't just kept it to myself.


So dearly beloved, will I ever love again?


All I remember is your bitter, sweet kiss.


And your arms wrapped around me.


Like angel’s wings you saved me.


Made me forget, you whispered the devil's thoughts


And how you flooded this house with hate.


But than all I’ve asked for you was to.


Be the last to kiss my lips.


Just for a bit to take the time to say your grace.


Just a little to remember my face.

I took a shot in the dark for you.


I guess I made my best for us to be two.


But it’s hard to understand why you aren’t true.


I guess I’ve been by myself all night long.


Pray for someone to teach me what home was again.


A part of me is still holding back and it won’t let you go.


I guess you should know.


That I loved you so.


So dearly departed, will I ever see you again?


All I remember is your bitter, sweet words.


And your arms wrapped around me.


Like angel’s wings you saved me.


Made me forget, that you whispered the devil's thoughts


And how you flooded this house with hate.


But than all I’ve asked for you was to.


Be the last to kiss my lips.


Just for a bit to take the time to say your grace.


Just a little to remember my face.


To let you know my case.


But I’ve known better just to let you in again.


I was being cruel to be kind.


Piece by piece I’m just over.


Word by word I’m all gone.


I hang on every letter you sent.


And they all end in “I love you so”.


But when you said you were leaving me behind.


It came by through a lie through one’s teeth.


(Ooo)


So dearly beloved, dearly departed, will I ever love again?


I need to see you just one more time again.


All I remember is your bitter, sweet kiss.


And your arms wrapped around me.


Like angel’s wings you saved me.


Made me forget, that you whispered the devil's thoughts


And how you flooded this house with hate.


But than all I’ve asked for you was to.


Be the last to kiss my lips.


Just for a bit to take the time to say your grace.


Just a little to remember my face.


And you’ll find the case.


(Ooo)


Just remember my face.


And say your grace.


Find the case.

 

Kai

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(My revise of the last song.)

It seems hopeless, I'd know.


But in the beginning,



We were both hanging by a thread


Your voice hurts, it's piercing.


It's enough to make me think


That I could maybe just trim your wings


Fall with me and just


Die with me


Forever we flee from those


Piercing voices, and that thinning thread


You would've known, how much I loved you.


If I hadn't just kept it to myself.


So dearly beloved, will I ever love again?


All I remember is your bitter, sweet kiss.


And your arms wrapped around me.


Like angel’s wings, you saved me.


Made me forget, you whispered the devil's thoughts


And how you flooded this house with hate.


But than all I’ve asked for you was to.


Be the last to kiss my lips.


Just for a bit to take the time to say your grace.


Just a little to remember my face.


I took a shot in the dark for you.


I guess I made my best for us to be two.


But it’s hard to understand why you aren’t true.


I guess I’ve been by myself all night long.


Pray for someone to teach me what home was again.


A part of me is still holding back and it won’t let you go.


I guess you should know.


That I loved you so.


So dearly departed, will I ever see you again?


All I remember is your bitter, sweet words.


And your arms wrapped around me.


Like angel’s wings you saved me.


Made me forget, that you whispered the devil's thoughts


And how you flooded this house with hate.


But than all I’ve asked for you was to.


Be the last to kiss my lips.


Just for a bit to take the time to say your grace.


Just a little to remember my face.


To let you know my case.


But I’ve known better just to let you in again.


I was being cruel to be kind.


Piece by piece I’m just over.


Word by word I’m all gone.


I hang on every letter you sent.


And they all end in “I love you so”.


But when you said you were leaving me behind.


It came by through a lie through one’s teeth.


(Ooo)


So dearly beloved, dearly departed, will I ever love again?


I need to see you just one more time again.


All I remember is your bitter, sweet kiss.


And your arms wrapped around me.


Like angel’s wings you saved me.


Made me forget, that you whispered the devil's thoughts


And how you flooded this house with hate.


But than all I’ve asked for you was to.


Be the last to kiss my lips.


Just for a bit to take the time to say your grace.


Just a little to remember my face.


And you’ll find the case.


(Ooo)


Just remember my face.


And say your grace.


Find the case.
 
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Kai

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I'm going to go back to this as well, to give the forums some activity and things to do for myself..
 
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