The Numenor's Quarian Application

[WardenXIII]

Steam Name/Steam ID : The Númenor Ranger/STEAM_0:0:30884758

How long have you played on the server?: Just about a day. (Though I've been playing ME for the better part of five years, and have been Role Playing for nearly a decade.)

Characters name/nicknames: Waen'Saelun 'Waen' (pronounced Wayne) Nar Nofirn

Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)) : Quarian

Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/available-positions-aboard-the-ship.2905/)) : Infiltrator/Tech Support. The Sniper class.

Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) :
(Equipment) The Colossus Evirosuit. The Shuriken sub-machine gun. The Military Grade Omni-Tool.
(Abilities) Disruptor/Cryo ammo. Incinerate. Tactical Cloak.

Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral: Neutral leading to Paragon.

Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)) : Raised on the Flotilla, Waen looked up to the exploits of Tali'Zorah. She was an inspiration to most people; fighting the Reaper scurge with the famous Commander Sheppard, as well as regaining their home alongside their one hated enemy, but now friends, the Geth. Being only a few years older than him, the moment he could go on his Pilgrimage, he went with a bounce in his step and his head held high. He had been on the homeworld of his race, and had even managed to take his evirosuit off. But he yearned for the freedom of the stars, seeking adventure and anything that could aid in the furthering of the newly remade homeworld.

What is your characters goal aboard the ship? Why were they hired by New Eden? : Waen's goals are simple: he wants adventure. More than that, he wants to find tech that could be used to help further the advancement of his friends and family back on their homeworld. He would have been hired onto New Eden based on his knowledge of machines; star ships, cars, tanks... If it could move, he knew a way to make it move faster. He even learned some about the Geth after they joined force and before he left for his pilgrimage. He is also a decent crack shot with a rifle.

 

[Kai]

Neutral Support.
You are a new player, that's why I'm being generous instead of -Support.
You see like a nice person.
But there is one thing...

Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.

You really need to lengthen that background, like 3 or 2 paragraphs more also because you have special gear or bionics and are a quarian.

 

[HexyFlexyMonGon]

Backstory's too short. I'd drastically suggest increasing it.


-Support.

 

[[OMFL] Z]

For the level of equipment you are asking for, as well as the specific race you are applying for it needs to be longer. Though, please do not be discouraged, we want you to work on this a little more and join us.

 

[Hohen]

Denied reason being he didn't change anything and its been two weeks