Zetra Vex advanced character application

[chaosswarm]

Steam account: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198245430920/
Server playtime: a few hours
Name: Zetra Vex
Race: Turian
Requested position: rifleman
Alighnment: lawful good
Equipment: turian combat armor,avenger assault rifle,carnifex pistol
Backstory: Zetra Vex is a Turian woman borne on palaven around 25 years ago into a family that served on the PTFC and when she came of age she signed up to join the crew her mother and father served with Zetra is a dark skinned muscular-slim turian with skull like markings on her face that stands around 5” 6“ she will wear her casual clothes when off duty
Goal: to serve the citizens of the galaxy
Why were they hired by the PTFC?: born into service and joined when she could

 

[Dayzcool]

oof. Not to be that guy.

Spoiler: oof

I am that guy.

But this backstory needs to be revamped to heaven.

Spoiler: Look here if you want something to help you.

http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/varakors-turian-application.5573/ http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Turian

Good luck mate.

 

[Judge_Dreddpool]

-1 Agreeing with Dayzcool I am.

 

[Vanity]

Denied- Denied due to barebones app, put some more lore and background and reapply