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Aluzt

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Steam Name/Steam ID :
STEAM_0:1:30865416
Esstlyn


How long have you played on the server?:

Unsure - Will be on more often.

Characters name/nicknames:

Shuko "Sleuth" Fian


Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)) :

Drell

Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/available-positions-aboard-the-ship.2905/)) :

Engineering


Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) :
Department levels
| Tech: 6 | CQC: 4

Gear:
Tactical Cloak
2x Carnifex pistol

1x Logic Arrest Omni-Tool

Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral:

Neutral - Learning on Renegade

Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)):

<.: Terminal Start Up Activated :.>

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<.: Log in | Sign up | :.>

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SELECTED: Login

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<.: Insert password and mail address :.>
<.: Mail Address: ***** :.>
<.: Password: ****:.>

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<.: Welcome! Fian, Shuko :.>
<.: What would you like to open today? :.>

<.: Personal Dossiary Selected :.>
<.: Loading, this will take approximately five minutes :.>

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<.: Name :.>
Shuko Fian
<.: Known
Aliases :.>
"Sleuth"
"Daemon"

<.: Description :.>

| Male | | Body type: Skinny - Lithe compared to Drells | Epidermis Colour: Described as "morphing" between Green and Blue | Described having black frills | Clothing: Said to wear an attire that is a mixture of a trench coat and a ceremonial robe.

<.: Biography :.>
Early Years:

Born roughly in 2147 on the Omega asteroid, Shuko was raised by two Drell parents named Lunno Fian and Omesa Fian. The duo had worked on the asteroid doing what Shuko had thought was mining what little deposits of Ezero there was left when in reality it was something much different and more hazardous.

From a young age, Shuko was taught the cruel lessons that Omega would offer. He learned how hard it was to make a living and ultimately survive when he could not rely on his parents. It was at this time he would begin to teach him self how to fight in the event he was to be mugged or worse.


With the lessons taught to him from a young age, He had grown up to be a tactical and cautious resident of the block he had lived in; due to the fact that he could perish at any moment if he took the wrong step. Wanting to avoid an early death, he became very paranoid and begun to find alternative paths around the block he lived in, discovering countless tunnels and ventilation shafts that he could use to hide in order to steal and loot others for credits and Dextro foods.




While his parents did come home from work, they came at very erratic times. Though they had cared about him deeply and to make up for this, they would often play games with him or partake in religious acts of the Drell Faith when it was time. He would also be taught how to use an omni-tool from his father at a very young age which would no doubt benefit his petty acts from here on out. It was at this time he began to experiment with doors and how to break them open with an omni-tool

At the age of 16, he had met an Asari named Saasa Murazor during one of his runs of scavaging supplies. They had hitched it off very well and it was revealed that she was a crime boss of the sector they lived in. Impressed by his behavior as they had been observing him, they hired him to be a delivery boy and as muscle in the event, they were to be attacked. This crime syndicate would be called the "Shattered Sons" where he would spend a good portion of his life in.

The Shattered Sons would often make use of his tracking and ability to memorize the ins and out of the local area of Omega they had operated in which would assist them in numerous missions in the years to come. A notable operation named "Operation: Veilshadow" was one that involved him scouting out a facility and a few apartment buildings in order to discover a vantage point. He was successful in this task and due to him, the operation was a success, the target presumed dead by the syndicate. This is where he would earn one of his many aliases, this one being "The Stalker."

Afterwards

For Shuko, life was wonderful, no longer was he just making it by and no longer did he have to worry about his parents that much; As they begun to come home at fixed times; or, around said fixed times.

A few years of silence passed with the occasional mission sent by Saasa ranging from getting a document to running some red sand to some lowly druggie in the slums, though this stopped abruptly when he came to his apartment seeing his parents being murdered in cold blood by the target he had assumed with dead, narrowly escaping with his epidermis intact.

Shuko wanting revenge and wanting to alert the Shattered sons about this went to Saasa, informing her about what happened. He spotted a visible expression of despair on her face and she offered to take him in after they were done talking. Together they would plan to kill the target who avoided the assassination, swearing revenge on the Turian he named "The Silver Skull" for murdering his parents.
Teenage years.

Shuko spent more time with the Shattered Sons, this where he would learn how to fight in an urban environment and learn how to use omni-shielding over his armor with the local tech expert, a female Quarian named Vah'eryia vas Rayya. He would also continue to do much more of the same basic but deadly tasks with each one getting more complex as time went on, thinking it as some sort of test, he pressed on.

During one of his runs, Shuko had found the Turian again, it was at this time he was heading to a local club where he would begin to stalk him between runs, being extra careful as to not be discovered for obvious reasons.

The Drell, in his later years as a teenager, he befriended a couple clients who he had met during his runs. From this he would begin to start up a side business, this being an investigation firm where he would investigate crimes for who ever paid him enough. Eventually, he was able to afford his first firearms, this being the pair of carnifexes he still uses to this day.

The Drell made quite the name for himself for this and due to that, he made his first enemies who were hired to kill him. In the midst of a delivery, he was ambushed by mercs who called them selves the "Dusk Raiders" who were tasked to kill him in order to silence him.

The battle was rough and he did suffer a few *minor* injuries but nothing crippling, carefully he executed the mercs by making use of his personal cloaker, stabbing and shooting them all till there was only one.

With the last one alive, he made sure to keep him alive and had him
interrogated to find out who had sent them. Finding that out, he begun to set up a plan to murder those who tried to have him dead, vowing that he would kill the mob boss that tried to have him dead. This mob would be called the "Dark Arks", a group that is known for their shoddy production of red sand and trade deals with the Dusk Raiders.

It was from here on out he would begin to plot for the eventual demise of the two groups, carefully stalking Dons and lieutenants of both groups till he was ready and the time was just right, spending years upon years of practice for the faithful day where he would finally be at peace.
Later years.

At the age of twenty-five and with a soaring set of contacts that only grew larger as the months went by thanks to his investigation firm, he had started to drift away from his adoptive mother's syndicate. Though, before this Saasa had to reveal a few things to him. One of the major things she had informed him about was that his parents were also clients of hers and that due to her carelessness they had been discovered and killed by an assassin who Shuko knew all too well about.

Saasa had also informed him about the current status of the Silver Skull, consequently, he was the head Don of both the Arks and the Raiders and together they formed a massive syndicate that threatens many souls that lived in their sector of Omega.

After being told this, he and a few others began to assemble a group that would put down this murderer once and for all. Carefully they hacked numerous cameras and security reports in order to track down the heads of the organization, starting with the Raiders knowing that they often provided muscle for the Arks.

Shuko and crew spent years doing this, recruiting people for the cause like his Quarian teacher and some other clients who were interested in the dispatching of the rival group to finally put an end to them. It was during this time that the local sector Shuko lived in became an on and off war zone, conducting numerous raids into the commonwealth's territory with minimal losses due to the routes memorized from his earlier years which allowed them to appear somewhere one minute and elsewhere in a matter of moments.

It took weeks to stalk the Turian and it was only made easier becuase he had managed to get one of the dancers to cough up information about him. He would later be identified as a "Cnaruns Opicus." Using his network, he found the Alien in a hidden compound.

This went on till they could finalize an assault on the compound both the Arks and the Raiders had bunkered them selves in. Shuko and his crew of mercs seized the opportunity and went to end them once and for all after they had discovered tunnels and shafts hidden under the compound.

Together, they made sure that all of the important figures were in the compound after they managed to get them to call a conference thanks to some assistance on the inside which turned out to be the man he let survive many years ago when he was attacked, this man would later be identified only by his last name, this last name being Graystone.

With the conference set up and all the targets in one place, they began to plant explosives under the facility, carefully knocking out any patrols that were guarding the tunnels underground with little to no injuries outside of a graze one of his squad members had suffered.

The attack was a success and this time they made sure the Silver Skull was dead, they eliminated any stragglers and they soon spit up soon after leaving the Drell all alone for once in his life.

it was for a while he began to suffer from an acute case of depression after having nothing else to do other than being a detective in the slums of Omega. It was during this time however he had decided to abandon it all and traverse the stars where he would make a name for himself outside of Omega, leading him to discover the New Eden PMC



What is your characters goal aboard the ship? Why were they hired by New Eden? :

His main goal for getting aboard the vessel is so Shuko and keep up a living as well as to put his skills to work. Outside of this, he has no other goals in life at the moment.





 
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Aluzt

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this is my first major foray into Mass Effect
pls no hurt.
Made a slight date mistake but its fixed now.
 

Boomhauer

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We sort of expect longer more descriptive biographies when people apply for Drell, or most other races in general
 

Aluzt

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We sort of expect longer more descriptive biographies when people apply for Drell, or most other races in general

You wanted a backstory? I gave you a hell of a backstory.

I even did it on mobile lol so excuse any miss spellings, I'll fix them when I get on my pc.
 

Kai

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I like it...as much as Boomhauer's clit, I mean what?
 

Aluzt

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I changed the combat rankings to reflect his backstory more better.

Mostly the R&D bit
 

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I did some more edits and redid the backstory a bit more.
hopefully this is better.
 

Boomhauer

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@Boomhauer
Do you want me to make it more longer? Or want me to fix anything? Or is this good?
Sorry but yes, Drell are incredibly rare in the universe so I typically expect them to be the same size if not longer than Quarian applications.
 

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Sorry but yes, Drell are incredibly rare in the universe so I typically expect them to be the same size if not longer than Quarian applications.
Can I ask how many paragraphs your looking for?
 

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Massive fokin update to his backstory, doubling it by two making it 1,600+ words if my math is to be correct.

Now my hands hurt.
 
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Boomhauer

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Accepted; Note, CQC isn't a thing, and you'll only get one carnifex.
 

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Congrats ma'am.
 
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