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Fred's Drell MP Application

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Fredthebrick

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Steam Name/Steam ID : STEAM_0:1:47625313

How long have you played on the server?: I connected briefly, but disconnected soon after to do some lore research


Characters name/nicknames: Dromo Kien

Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only, and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)) : Drell

Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/available-positions-aboard-the-ship.2905/)) : Military Police

Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) : Medium Combat Suit with some minor modifications for comfort, M9 Tempest, M3 Predator.

Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral:Neutral, leaning towards paragon

Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)) : Dromo is a 24 year old Drell, born and raised on Kahje by his two loving parents. Early in his life, his parents split, and Dromo was given into his fathers custody, which landed him on a ship bound for adventure. From a young age Dromo had a sense of adventure and a thirst for knowledge as his father and he traveled the stars, exploring and trading with those they met, and very rarely fighting off attackers or raiders. However it was the citadel that would eave the largest mark on Dromo, for never had he seen such a large conglomerate of species, working together, to maintain something he had never really realised existed, which was order. He was taken in by the prospect of a perfect community, where there was no crime, no murders, no loss.

Dromo decided to stay on the Citadel, leaving his father to go back on his adventures as he instead began training to become a C-Sec officer, as he strongly believed he could make an impact. During his training, and his stay aboard the Citadel, he watched countless military vessels venture in and out, bringing in their chaos hungry warriors. They were always loud, always caused trouble, and always thought they were better. It was after months of seeing that behaviour that Dromo decided he'd inquire into working aboard a military vessel instead.

His intentions weren't to attempt changing the way of warriors, for he knew that's just how it was. Men and women who risked their lives, for whatever reason, as often and as extremely as soldiers did were bound to be a bit mad. No, Dromo was intent on joining them, but not as a fellow chaos seeker, instead as a beacon of order and accord. Much like the Torian's view on honour, courage and unit cohesion, Dromo knew that the unruly and untamed soldiers, when directed correctly, would be a force to reckon with, which is why professional armies are so effective compared to less organized guerilla forces.

After a few weeks, he received word that one of his inquiries had been answered, and after a brief dialogue Dromo signed his contract, finished his training and left to forge his own future.


What is your characters goal aboard the ship? Why were they hired by New Eden? : Dromo's goal aboard the ship is to assist in both combat operations, and maintaining law and order aboard the ship during off duty hours.
 
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It needs to be a bit longer for the specific biotic abilities you have applied for as those are fairly powerful when engaging people. Such as his Eezo exposure, and what training he has had.
 

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It needs to be a bit longer for the specific biotic abilities you have applied for as those are fairly powerful when engaging people. Such as his Eezo exposure, and what training he has had.
I've removed the biotic part. After some thought, I don't want my first character having biotic abilities. Not until I get a good feel for everything, then I might apply for a second :)
 

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+1, the decision to remove the biotic wasn't as need you could've added more to get biotic but since you did I see no problems with the app.
 

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+1, the decision to remove the biotic wasn't as need you could've added more to get biotic but since you did I see no problems with the app.
Thanks for the +1 :). I removed the Biotic abilities as I didn't feel like they were really needed at all. I'm sure there's plenty of biotics already.
 
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