My character App

[Lucas Wis]

DO NOT RESPOND TO THIS POST WITH YOUR APPLICATIONS~ THEY WILL IMMEDIATELY BE DENIED

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Steam Name / Steam ID : Vaako Takka 76561198265364083

How long have you played on the server?:
1 hour 52 Minutes and 33 seconds.
i have been on this server quite a long time you can ask cross knows me


Characters name/nicknames: Arm InTelligent Mega Machine Short version AIMM

Characters Race: Loki
Requested position aboard the ship: Service Bot
Specific equipment, weaponry, gear, and/or abilities: Heavy Weapons And Rocket Launcher
Demolition

Characters alignments (Select one, or make one.):

• • Lawful Good, "Crusader"
  • Neutral Good, "Benefactor"
  • Chaotic Good, "Rebel"
  • Lawful Neutral, "Judge"
  • Neutral, "Undecided" This one
  • Chaotic Neutral, "Free Spirit"
  • Lawful Evil, "Dominator"
  • Neutral Evil, "Malefactor"
  • Chaotic Evil, "Lucifer"

Characters Backstory: AIMM was created By an Unknow Company And Seems to be the only one of it kind when Aimm, Aimm was found on an patrol of Krogans Scavenger Made it to a deadly machine When they turn it on AIMM started killing them one by one In The Most Brutal Ways
Then one Human Found AIMM In a very bad shape, Fix AIMM Then Aimm starting to serve the human who fix AIMM Years have past through The human died In her Sleep Aimm then stay by her side until his system was to old, Years Passed yet again AIMM was again found by a patrol but not Scavenger A group of Joint race peace keeping task force. Found Aimm And RePair AIMM
He Still Have His Old memorize Og the one Aimm Serve, Now Aimm is Working For The Group That Found Aimm

What is your character's goal aboard the ship?: Serving anyone who need AIMM

Why were they hired by PTFC? : Aimm was Hired beacse He Only ask to serve anyone who need Him

 

[Kai]

 

[Lucas Wis]

i have never made an app before so i hope i made it good enough

 

[Kai]

DETAIL NOW! ​

 

[Lucas Wis]

i do not fully understand?

 

[Kai]

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[Lucas Wis]

ohhh

 

[[OMFL] Z]

Needs a lot more detail.

 

[Kai]

DETAIL!​

 

[Dusty-]

Finally, someone that's not a FUCKING AI FOR ONCE. Though, I have a few issues aside from this.

Nummer eent: A robot of ANY kind would have been thoroughly investigated before even being allowed to operate within a crew like this; whether it be by the crew themselves, or their employers. Believe it or not, the crew is smarter than that. (I hope...)

Nummer zwou: I understand that the Loki is supposed to be 'Higher-grade' than the average Loki; but as such things weren't specified like 'Stronger joint couplings' or some fancy alloy to compensate for average Loki armor...I find it very hard to believe that a Loki would be able to kill not just one-- but a PATROL of Krogan. Armed or not.

Zuel dräi: I feel that the origins of the machine could be explained; as I doubt anyone is going to just be like, 'That came from blah blah blah because I've seen those before'. If anything, make it an average Loki for now. Knowing the players here (If you take offense to this, just know that I'm not referring to anyone in particular; and if you still take offense to this, then you can blow me.) they'll make you into some fancy robutt because they have a fetish for things that can easily be manipulated/corrupted.

 

[[OMFL] Z]

Denied - Lack of Work on the application, add more backstory.