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Shiv- Geth hunter app

Paleorex

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---This is a work in progress--
Steam Name/Steam ID : PaleoRex

How long have you played on the server?: almost a month now


Characters name/nicknames: Striker

Characters Race : Geth Hunter

Requested position aboard the ship((http://revivalservers.com/index.php?threads/available-positions-aboard-the-ship.2905/)) : Security

Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)) : Gear- Standard Shotgun, Personal Cloaking Device, CQC-4 Tech- 2

Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral: neutral

Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)) :
-----Before the Geth left----
Created in a lab Shiv was loaded with mostly programs for espionage, he was originaly Designed to leave a small man Squad to Assassinate important enemies of the Quarians and Extract information from Enemies labs and organizations.
His origin mission led him and 3 more Hunters into a enemy lab in order to extract information on a new weapon type, Him and his group Entered the lab without a hitch taking out his prey without a hitch, and Recovered the weapon loosing only one of his unit. Seeing as room to advance he Was de- Activated and Re programmed with newer Stealth tactics Designed to replace the flaws that his companion had.

The units Second Mission Designation was to take out a high priority Target that was leading a Revolt Against His Creators Labs, He Successfully Infiltrated his targets homestead where he killed his Target and his Wife the killing machine Stopping Before his targets daughter where his programmed mind seemed to wander and think for its own. When he Returned back to creator he was Re programmed once more in an Attempt to Wipe Free his Sentience.

Soon after he was sent on his last mission, This time he was Sent with a group 4 others in an attempt to Take over Rival Scientist Base, This base was heavily Fortified and also was in construction of other Geth soldiers, His Team Approached the mission without Questions and infiltrated the base, when his fellow Hunters broke through the First layers of Base they were Stopped by a Geth Prime this one Acted Differently than the others and Thought for its own, much like how Shiv was learning himself, After a long Shiv;s Companions were shot down, not capable of Thinking beyond their programming, Shiv Felt a Form of Sadness as his brothers were Shot down, and in Return ended up getting blasted down into a Garbage Compactor, only to Get Buried under his fallen Brothers Being Treated as Trash, Shiv Began a slow and painfull self Repair as his systems went offline.
-------- After Geth Seperation------
Years later A human Scavenger found Shiv within a large dump, Realizing the Geth was Still in Tact he worked on Scavenging parts from shivs fallen brothers and Helped Repair the Geth, Shivs systems flaired up with sentient light as the man Finished the repairs, Shiv Adapting to his situation Accepted this man as his Savior becoming his Bodyguard and Aid.
For Years Shiv Traveled with the Scavenger learning of the Fate of his Borthers and Their Fredom from their Creators and Their Self isolation, He Though did not seek his "Family" as he had a new one with this human. Though when he had the chance he did commune with any Geth he found.

When the Reapers Released their message Asking For the Geth to join Them, Shiv Shook his head and Dissagreed with what they wanted, He Sided with his Human companion Who was now Getting slower with his age.

When the Reapers originally Attacked his new master met a unfortinat Fate, Shiv was not capable of protecting or Extracting his Companion and was forced to flee, He found Refuge among smugglers and Eventually was Reqruited in the army fighting off Against the Reaper invasion, He eventually found his way to the new Crew and offered his service to the captain as a Security officer and a infiltrator.


What is your characters goal aboard the ship? Why were they hired by New Eden? : He Seeks to Bring death to the Reapers, in Revenge for the man who helped him recover from his botched mission, From there he wishes to make a new home and Friends Realizing that the other Races are Capable of Teaching him more than the geths overall want for perfection.
 
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Dayzcool

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To be honest a little part of this the raid on the quarian lab ain't that lore friendly considering the Geth stayed behind the "veil" or basically back on Rannoch as they had no need to attack the quarians anymore. Plus with the long life span you could write a bit longer of a story. Not trying to shit on your app or anything but maybe rewrite it a bit?
 

Paleorex

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That was Before they left the Service and Gained their Freedom, and ill have to add more stuff to this. it was a quick jot down
 

Dayzcool

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They adopted an extremely isolationist attitude—any ships that ventured into geth space were immediately attacked and destroyed. While they prevented any contact by other races with themselves, the geth monitored communications and the extranet. Basically saying they only attacked stuff it came near them. They didn't do raids. Have you researched the geth on the wiki? Honestly I'm just trying to help you out as most geth apps that are accepted are multiple paragraphs long.
 

Paleorex

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according to the wiki they were Created by the Quarians as laborers and Tools of war. The above the line that i had posted is before the they fully Gained their Freedom and killed their Quarian owners, From there is a more personal on its own Trip through time much like a Relic found in a junkyard that was cleaned up and upgraded.

http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Geth
 

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It's not about slots, it's about that noone understands how to play a synthetic hive-mind.
So no, this shoudn't be allowed into the server.
Then suggest for a change; do not negative support someone's application because you think Geth shouldn't be allowed. It is not constructive in attention to the application's content.
 

HexyFlexyMonGon

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Then suggest for a change; do not negative support someone's application because you think Geth shouldn't be allowed. It is not constructive in attention to the application's content.

Kaje, they think that nobody can properly play Geth on the server. which is understandable, really. This is a perfectly valid reason to leave a negative support.

An invalid reason would be a -Support just because of slots, which they are not doing. They didn't state Geth shouldn't be allowed, they stated this application shouldn't be.
 

Kaje

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Kaje, they think that nobody can properly play Geth on the server. which is understandable, really. This is a perfectly valid reason to leave a negative support.

An invalid reason would be a -Support just because of slots, which they are not doing. They didn't state Geth shouldn't be allowed, they stated this application shouldn't be.

The review does not provide any constructive criticism of the application itself; only a complaint that is not at all the fault of the applicant. He (Viscious) has not referenced to any evidence by which displays the applicant to be incapable of the roleplay.

From what I was told, application reviews are meant only to pertain to the application itself and the applicant. Viscious's review does not satisfy either prerequisite to even remotely deem his review appropriate. There is no beneficial advise given to the applicant, hence the review should be removed.
 

Paleorex

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in actuality geth when alone would be more animal like in mind, while still being able to think they would not have the proper reaction speed and essentially be slowed down, when 2 or more gather their "hive" mind works, now its not a complete hive mind they do not share thoughts and the such its more a shared perception and processing power, and from, what i have seen only one geth is capable of fully operating by himself and that was Legion Or Geth Vi,. the reason he was capable of doing what he did without needing to be with other geth was because he as they had more programs than a normal Geth tended to have, and was specially made, not even a Geth prime could properly function by itself To its full potential without another Geth being around. so in all honestly without at least 2 or 3 geth together having the single geth would not be that usefull, Also this would provide interesting roleplay for the geth that already exists on the ship since their programming would link (and her Capabilities would Boost his). But if people are Against this idea ill think of something completly Different, as i was originally Aiming for possibly a Loki, Fenris, or Ymir mech to play as with a Ai programmed into it.
 
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