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Talyth Dergo's ACA

!Graylox!

big boy
Joined
Jan 27, 2017
Messages
131
Points
28
Age
23
Steam Name/Steam ID:
!Graylox! / STEAM_0:1:81014819

How long have you played on the server?:
For a while now
Characters name/nicknames:

Talyth Dergo

Characters Race((Be aware Quarian, and Turian are application only and must have a detailed backstory in order for the character to be accepted.)):
Krogan
Requested position aboard the ship:

Pilot
Specific Gear, and/or abilities((Biotic abilities, Implants, and biotic abilities are application ONLY)):
M-300 Claymore
Characters alignment, IE Paragon, Renegade, Neutral:
Paragon
Characters Backstory((The longer, and more detailed the backstory, the most likely you will be accepted.)):

Talyth Dergo was born on Tachunka, May 12th, 1912. He was always a tamed kid, he went through his rite of passage only barely when he was a whelp, He didn't kill the Thresher Maw, but he survived it. In his clan, everyone is responsible for something in the resurrection of the Dreadnought they are trying to fix. When he went to the Shaman to get his assignment the Shaman looked at him with awe, and said: "You, young whelp will be our Dreadnought's Pilot!". Dergo was quite surprised at this, he's never even been on a ship, how was he suppose to pilot it? He initially questioned the Shamans judgment and left to seek out new things and new environments. He traveled the world as a Nomad for about 50 years before coming back to Tachunka and taking his role as a pilot seriously. By the time he returned, he was a new man, a changed one at that. He knew that in order to get the training he'd have to go off of Tachunka, he left ambitious and not a clue on where to go. He decided that since it was a military class vessel that he could start with the Alliance, but they gave him nothing more than gentle racist comments and pushed him aside, stating "A Krogan wouldn't be a good pilot anyways". He was quite torn after this, he couldn't quite think of where to go. "Do I go to the damned Salarians? NO, how could I? I can't go to the damned Turians other, GODDAMNIT". But then it came to him, he would just become a merc, they're kind of open-minded, right? He went to the only mercs he'd ever heard about, the Blood Pack. It was quite a vicious sight, the moment he even stated his name was the moment he failed. They began attempting to kill him, he wasn't worth being in the Bloodpack, a clansman of Talyth? HELL NO! They beat him to he was almost dead, but never finished the job, they would never give him an actual death. Dergo sat there, bloodied, bruised, and barely alive. He fell into a temporary coma, while he dreamed he thought of Tachunka, and of his fellow Clansmen. he was a long way home, a long way. When he woke he was in an apartment bed, an Asari at his side, he attempted to get up, but his wounds were too great. The Asari made him rest assure that she wasn't a threat and that she actually was there to help. The Asari's name was Asarha Kyanus, she was a local dancer at the club in Omega, luckily for Dergo she also had a soft spot for Krogans, and good looking ones at that. Dergo stayed with Asarha for about two weeks, before departing for his last hope, a PMC with nicely formed feet. He decided this may be his beast bet, they were formed for the best of all races, they were formed right after the first of the Reaper threats appeared, New Eden. He spent five years in a New Eden flight school and was only bested by one Turian, one of his best friends. In his time of the NFS, he experienced a lot of different things. He became best friends with a Turian, he learned new things about Salarians. And he had the time of his life, but that was harmed when he heard about the Reaper attack on Tachunka, he quickly returned and examined his clan's lost. His clan lost half his men and the Dreadnought, lost. He didn't have any idea what to do, he couldn't really do much he's no leader. So he left, and officially joined New Eden.

What is your character's goal aboard the ship? Why were they hired by New Eden? :
To fly ships and kick some ass, he likes to think of this as a learning experience.
 
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Dayzcool

Halfway Revival
Joined
Jan 25, 2017
Messages
340
Points
63
Age
21
I have a feeling that uhh not enough backstory bb since Krogan is you know uhh 30$ donation item
 

!Graylox!

big boy
Joined
Jan 27, 2017
Messages
131
Points
28
Age
23
I have a feeling that uhh not enough backstory bb since Krogan is you know uhh 30$ donation item

But I did the spendin, and I thought it wasn't enough either, I already had a plan to make an updated one later when I had more ideas
 

MissMurder

MERP Head Game Maker
Joined
Mar 19, 2017
Messages
56
Points
28
NEUTRAL- I get the char is donator, but... Maybe add a bit more OOMF to the backstory- give a bit more detail regarding who he is as a character- And rather than 'Pilot' you'd most likely be assigned as a member of "Fleet Staff".
 

!Graylox!

big boy
Joined
Jan 27, 2017
Messages
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Points
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Age
23
NEUTRAL- I get the char is donator, but... Maybe add a bit more OOMF to the backstory- give a bit more detail regarding who he is as a character- And rather than 'Pilot' you'd most likely be assigned as a member of "Fleet Staff".

I've updated
 

MissMurder

MERP Head Game Maker
Joined
Mar 19, 2017
Messages
56
Points
28
ACCEPTED- You donated for the char, and the app is acceptable... Welcome to the Astraea
 

ZombinaWaifu

Old HaloRP Manager|Old TS HA|Old Forums HA
Joined
Mar 8, 2017
Messages
204
Points
28
Age
22
Murder why
He's so bad at life that I don't want him on my Forum team (jk I love you marry me graylox)
 

ZombinaWaifu

Old HaloRP Manager|Old TS HA|Old Forums HA
Joined
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Messages
204
Points
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Age
22
Kicked from my Forum team. Fuck outta here with that shitty ass odst bs
 
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