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CrioChamber's GM application

CrioChamber

The Unrelenting Soldier
Joined
Dec 3, 2017
Messages
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Age
25
Location
TX. U.S.A.
Steam ID:

STEAM_1:1:52004045

What’s your name in game? How long do you have in game?:

ODST T24 MED SSgt George
Time in-game: 2 Weeks and 2 days so far.

Do you have any bans/warns?:

Bans: No.

Warns: Yes.
Saying cheese: didn't know it was bad word on the server at the time.
FailRP: Kill command. Was trying to grab the attention of medical RPers who I was medical RPing with before the cheese kick. I don't know what was going through my head. Had I remembered about /sleep from my exploring DarkRP days, I would've likely used that.

Both were a while enough back that these may have been thrown off record according to the server.

Age (Minimum 15):

19

Do you have a microphone?(Required):

Yes

Do you have TeamSpeak(Required)?:

Yes

TS3 Name(Required):

CrioChamber | George Hanks

KIK name(Required):

CrioChamber (First: Charles Last: Bennett)

Are you currently staff on a different server? Are you willing to leave that staff position for the one you are applying for?

Negative.

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Experience with staffing (ULX, other servers, etc.):

I have minor experience in staffing on Minecraft. Though, they were empty and it was mostly setting up servers for people and coding in the permissions for the plugins. As for Garry’s Mod, I cannot say I have any staff experience.

How active will you be on the server?

Very active, provided that I am not also trying to attain time limited event items in another game such as in Dead By Daylight or Warframe at the same time, or am not busy with real life situations.

Days,Hours Of Availability:

Most Saturdays and Sundays: ~ 1 PM - ~2 AM (I am a night owl, so will likely change to all night, especially if I can get post-secondary education and job schedules that allow it.)

Mondays - Fridays: ~5 PM - 11 PM

This is on an in-school jobless basis. Will notify if something changes.

Explain why you're a better candidate than other candidates (75+ words):

I am able to some extent multitask at my computer. I have been known to be able to do what is called “Touch-Typing,” which is the ability to type on the keyboard without looking down at it. I am also expecting a Computer Science endorsement from my High School, having taken Computer Science PAP, a pre-college level class, and Computer Science A AP, a first semester of college level class. When I took the AP exam for the AP Computer Science class I was taking, I received a four out of five score on the exam. A four out of five, according to College Board, is a very qualified score. Half of the class was conceptual; it went over Matrices, Inheriting Values from Inputs of Other Classes, Template Classes, Abstract Classes, Truth Tables, among others. Speaking of concepts, while I may take a bit of time to get proficient using them in practice, I can learn them quickly.

How do you plan to benefit the server? (50+ words):

I plan to develop the story on Revival, as well as create and share side stories of my own in the form of events as I come up and develop them. I also plan to help other gamemakers with their own events, especially when I know I will be too busy to develop my own event for said week(s).

List (10) Ulx Commands and what they do(List something other than: cloak,ban,Kick,Warn,TP,Maul,Slay,Gag,):
  1. !send | Sends a player to another player.

  2. !bring | Brings a player to you.

  3. !strip | Strips a player of all weapons. Usually for roleplay reasons or misbehaving players.

  4. !return | Returns a player to their original position.

  5. !thetime | Tells all players the current time according to the server.

  6. !noclip | Activates Noclip.

  7. !spectate | Spectates a player. Disables movement for the user’s character, and puts their camera on an orbit around the chosen player.

  8. !map | Changes the map from selection.

  9. !removeRagdolls | Removes all ragdolls on the map.

  10. !clearDecals | Removes all bullet holes, blood, etc. From the map.
What is In character and what is Out of character?

OOC: Out of Character. In other words, people are talking to others about topics that are meant for real life events or matters. Such as where they are from in real life, what their real life opinion on their government is, and so on so forth.
IC: In Character. In other words, giving a (de)briefing, talking about enemies on the other side of a hill, giving orders, asking for things to happen within the game that characters normally would be able to do.

Are you willing to work with a Game Maker Team?

Yes. In fact, I have one current event planned with two others. Waiting for other confirmations because it deals with people’s characters (NO ONE DIES, deals with potentially bringing some MIA characters back).

What is the purpose of a Game Maker?

To develop story within the Revival Servers, and also to keep entertainment for everyone.

Give us a full event idea you have. ( 3 Paragraphs )

(ON MAP) A ship comes in with UNSC tags on the side of the ship, but the IFF tags do not match. The station and attempts to establish communications to figure out what they are doing. All they get is static, so they send ONI and ODST boarding parties to the ship. The rest of the station stays on yellow alert, ready for call. If SoSHoJ offer up their help, the UNSC tell them that they have it handled. Instead they ask that the SoSHoJ stay on planet to fortify. Those on the UNSC ship find a single man at the controls, stripped of weapons. If he is killed, they will need to find a log on one of the computers. If not, he will be interrogated on the station.


Whether they kill him or not, they find out that he was sent by someone to go to the station and where it came from. They send a small, essentially the size of a privately owned, ship to investigate. When he gets there, he announces that his ship has arrived and is now investigating. He reports that he has made ground and approaching the base. A explosion is heard, and screams that his ship was destroyed, only for communications to cut mid-sentence, with a quick buzz of a bullet flying in the background right before he stops. They then hold briefing that they are going to investigate a possible rogue base due to loss of contact with personnel send there and sounds of bullets whizzing past right before they lost contact, and thus are deploying.

(OFF MAP) They get to the base, and begin investigating. They have all forces hold while they establish communications with the base. They attempt to establish communications with the base, but fail to do so. This repeats three times, every time, only getting static. They decide to go ahead and proceed to the base and figure out what is going on, and find that there is apparently no one there. Player marines and player regular SoSHoJ units proceed down the vehicle elevator enmasse, while special forces proceed down the personnel elevator. As Marines enter toward the main room (Where the rock is), the ship that carried them to the base is penetrated and destroyed by a Mac Round from deep space. The destroyed UNSC ship’s pieces are sent flying into the moon, and kill a few unlucky Marines (They’ll be NPCs, players will not be harmed). One of the leads of the Marines on the surface announces that their only means of evacuation was just destroyed. This will probably lead Marines into a panic, which squad leads will have to remedy, while Naval requests replacements. SoSHoJ provide their own ship to assist in attacking what just destroyed the UNSC ship.

A pirate comes as a hologram to the soldiers in the center room with the rock, and says that he's successfully lured them to his trap, and that he plans to destroy the moon with everyone on it and take the Resurrection for himself, and use the planet below it for resources and slave labor. Base plate requests that SoSHoJ find the source of the program’s transmission and eliminate it. Just then, a ship comes in through slipspace and drops several drones to distract the SoSHoJ ship’s locking mechanisms, and drops a high explosive bomb set for fifteen minutes. The base is locked remotely by the pirate, who then warps out leaving his drones. SoSHoJ requests to take pursuit, but UNSC denies saying that they will all need a ride out to leave in time before the bomb goes off. Robots are activated inside the base, and are set to hostile, forcing the UNSC to fight off hordes of them while Engineers hack the terminals to the lift for emergency exit. This should take about five minutes. Soldiers first, then Engineers. Just then Command is heard over comms that they are being taken hostage. Base plate tells Engineering to disarm the bomb, but again have to deal with hordes of robots and automated vehicles.

(5 Minutes left on bomb) If they successfully disarm it within time, the pirate knows they are coming, and retreats. In doing so, he will be leaving a plethora of robot soldiers and space drones both around the planet and station and inside the station and on the planet. If they do not disarm the bomb in time, or decide not to, he will have no indication that they made it off, provided radio chatter is kept to a minimum or switched channels. Either way, reinforcements will not arrive in time, and base plate will tell any reinforcements that would have arrived to go reinforce the station. SoSHoJ will send as many extraction aircraft as they can back and forth to extract UNSC and ONI forces along with their own.

(ON MAP) (Everyone will be told to stay within their bunks until the last bit can be set up) UNSC, ONI, and SoSHoJ forces arrive at the hangers and blow one of the hangers open (Hanger bay 4, hanger 2 (For dramatic effect)). They’ve detected lots of the robots all around the station, and their objective to is take back the station. SoSHoJ, once unloaded all of UNSC and ONI, fly down to their planet and take that back. If the bomb was disarmed, there’ll be robots ready to shoot Command personnel if not taken out by surprise. If not, then the pirate will be there doing the same thing, but since he is not a robot has a chance to be talked down and taken to the brig. If unpersuaded, he will have to be killed, but if persuaded he will crouch down with keys out as a surrender, where he will be then be taken to the brig and likely questioned. If he found out any ONI information, he will be killed. If not, he will be sent to detention centers on Earth.

Event over.

I, CrioChamber, agree and understand that I am not staff, and it is not my job to do staff duties, unless there is 0 staff on I will not use my commands unless needed. I also agree that i will not noclip/abuse my powers.

I, CrioChamber, acknowledge that this application is to be filled out with complete honesty. Being accepted will hold me at a higher standard in behavior and demeanor. Not doing my job or abusing will result in an instant demotion.

I, CrioChamber, Swear to uphold the server rules, and enforce them. And to stay within the limits and rights given to me by my assigned rank within GM's. And to keep a calm head and clear judgement when dealing with staff and or players, in order to ensure fairness to all who join the server.

And that if I CrioChamber am found in violation of the rules I swore to uphold, and of this contract that I can and will be removed from GM's and or staff and forever barred from Re-Applying, along with any other Consequences that are deemed Necessary.
 
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Terra

As You Wish
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+1 I believe that with some help, and training. You could be a good asset to the Gamemakers.
 

Blaven

Pro Player In My Dreams
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Location
United States of America
-1
No experience with gmod tools or building, I recommend you practice before applying, and why would only ONI and ODST board seems a bit bias. Everyone should board or marines and special forces and/or ONI and anyone else for support.
 

CrioChamber

The Unrelenting Soldier
Joined
Dec 3, 2017
Messages
23
Points
3
Age
25
Location
TX. U.S.A.
-1
No experience with gmod tools or building, I recommend you practice before applying, and why would only ONI and ODST board seems a bit bias. Everyone should board or marines and special forces and/or ONI and anyone else for support.
It never said building. I've messed around with building in sandbox before. That was one of the first things I experimented with when I got GMod. Have I built much? Not really, but I know how it works. Also, EVERYONE has to start somewhere, hence why Mordred said with help and training.

Another thing, it would be ALL humans boarding. I said ONI and UNSC. Not ONI and ODSTs specifically. Though, those not allowed to enter ONI normally would still not be allowed in ONI, because ONI.

If you would like me to show you a simplified Climb Swep course I've made, which I made in hopes to allow Climb Swep Newbies a chance at learning it, I can send you pictures of it in a DM/PM.
 
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CrioChamber

The Unrelenting Soldier
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Age
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TX. U.S.A.
@CrioChamber “All they get is static, so they send ONI and ODST boarding parties to the ship.” I pulled this right from your text.
Ah. That part. I thought you were meaning the last part. That part was because My thinking was that they wouldn't know if any Intel that the Marines shouldn't be seeing would be on there, nor threat level. They would also need someone to man the defences if it were hostile. The ODSTs are capable of fending off hordes of enemies on their own, so threat level wouldn't have been too much of a worry. Just have them cover the entrance of the bridge or something once the bridge was cleared of any hostile if there were intelligence that would be ONI classified.
 
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John Wick

Hollowed
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looking at the event it seems good but relies on everything falling into place perfectly, which is difficult as all hell to do, it'd be good but another question i'd have is that the UNSC would pull their flag to go and search a place for the simple reason that;

"All he knows is that he was told to come to the station and tell them where he came from"

i just don't think that'd warrant an entire force to just up and go to this place.
 

CrioChamber

The Unrelenting Soldier
Joined
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Messages
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Age
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Location
TX. U.S.A.
looking at the event it seems good but relies on everything falling into place perfectly, which is difficult as all hell to do, it'd be good but another question i'd have is that the UNSC would pull their flag to go and search a place for the simple reason that;

"All he knows is that he was told to come to the station and tell them where he came from"

i just don't think that'd warrant an entire force to just up and go to this place.
Could send a small ship (would be deleted once it "enters slipspace"), and they lose contact with it afterwards. They find his body inside the base when they launch the investigation. Also, it's all just an idea. I'll just edit the event now to reflect this.

Edit: Done.

Edit 2:
Be sure to add in HoJ to ;-;
HoJ would be along with SoS. Should probably label SoS as SoSHoJ. I might be a little bias, but I still picture Jiralhanae as part of the Covenant.
 
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Jai

Ex Forum Manager | Ex Nomad Spartan Team Creator
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Its one of the more in depth events that have been posted to the forums in a while. I know you from when you tried out for Nomad and as it was said, with training and time you would be a good asset to the team. People seem to misunderstand that everyone starts in a certain place and gets better with practice and dedication. So if you're willing to learn, spend time building things, and developing stories that evolve around the player base I don't see how you'd be a bad candidate like people are trying to say.

Regardless, you have my vote.

+1
 
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While the event idea is well thought out, it assumes many things will go right, including unpredictable player decisions. Certain aspects like debris falling from a shot frigate would be very difficult and possibly laggy in the execution. While this event would be good if it worked, it would be extremely difficult and unpredictable in the execution. The reason im not doing a -1 is because you used some creative ideas and you clearly dedicated a lot of time to this event, and we need more gms that are willing to use new ideas and spend lots of time planning.

If you get accepted my reccomendation is that you keep in mind player choice in events, and to mentally rewrite this event in a way that doesnt require everything to fall perfectly into place. Always keep the execution (how would i do this?) in mind.
 

CrioChamber

The Unrelenting Soldier
Joined
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Messages
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Age
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Location
TX. U.S.A.
Since I am getting a lot of replies that I am predicting everything falling into place perfectly, and I realize this is bad thing considering I am not working by myself here, I will be seeing where I can add some variables to it.

I used to write a couple of fan fictions to ease my mind when I had something stuck in my head. My longest one is a Final Fantasy XIV fanfiction (9 chapters so far, spread over almost 80 pages on google docs), which didn't require me predicting unpredictable player actions. Might have been where all of the "Everything needs to fall into place perfectly" came in.

Edit: I will update the event as I finish modifying parts of it.
 
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Highest Noon

The Highest of all the Noons
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+1
Good event idea plus seems like a respectable person.

Good Luck.
 

Lex

Some guy
Halo RP
Game Maker
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Contact myself or a senior for an interview. We are always in the teamspeak, please don't hesitate to approach us.
 
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